[原创]今天修改了维基百科全书中关于ROBERTO AYALA的词条，爽！

joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-3 05:18:00

国内的朋友可能不大熟悉维基百科全书 (WIKIPEDIA)。这应该算是网上最权威的英文百科全书。

我用GOOGLE搜索一下ROBERTO AYALA，第一条结果就是维基百科全书对他的介绍。

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roberto_Ayala

点开一看，别的还好，对老鼠的国家队生涯是这么介绍的。

Ayala played for Argentina at the 1996 Summer Olympics, winning the silver medal. He played for Argentina in the 1998 World Cup and was a non-playing squad member in the 2002 competition due a last minute injury. He was then selected as an over-age player as Argentina won the gold medal at the 2004 Summer Olympics.Ayala was also named to the Argentine squad for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany, but unfortunately, he missed a penalty in the quarter-final shootout against Germany.

阿亚拉参加96年奥运会并活得银牌。他参加了98年世界杯，在02年世界杯上因为最后一分钟的伤病而无法上场。他作为一名超龄队员参加04年奥运会并获得金牌。阿亚拉参加了06年世界杯，遗憾的是他在四分之一决赛对德国的点球大战中射失点球。

前面都不错，看到最后简直气晕我，难道老鼠在06年世界杯上做的唯一事情就是射失点球吗?

维基百科全书最好的一点，是他允许读者参与编辑。我把他的国家队生涯编辑为:

Ayala played for Argentina at the 1996 Summer Olympics, winning the silver medal. He played for Argentina in the 1998 World Cup and was a non-playing squad member in the 2002 competition due a last minute injury. He was then selected as an over-age player as Argentina won the gold medal at the 2004 Summer Olympics 。Ayala played an integral part in the Argentine squad for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany. He played brilliantly throughout the tourment and was picked as one member of the All Star Team. In the quarterfinal against Germany he scored a beautiful header that gave Argentina the 1-0 lead. Unfortunately, Argentina lost the penalty shootout after the 1-1 tie.

One of the best defenders in Argentina history, Ayala also shared the most capped hounour with Diego Simone. He played 106 times for the national team as of Novermber 2006, many times as captain.

2006年世界杯阿亚拉是阿根廷队中最重要的成员。整个杯赛他表现极为出色，入选最佳阵容。在对德国的八強賽中，他的一记漂亮头球使阿根廷1-0先。遗憾的是阿根廷被扳平后在点球大战中败北。

阿亚拉是阿根廷历史上最佳后卫之一。他和西蒙尼分享为国家队出场最多次数的荣誉。截止2006年11月，他为阿根廷队一共出场106次，并多次担任队长一职。

红字是我修改的部分。

修改完毕，感觉很爽！

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joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-3 05:21:00

以下为修改前后的截图。

修改前

修改后

顺便替国际米兰战线的萨队之家做个广告，我在那里玩得很开心，欢迎大家都来灌水。

http://www.inter1908.net/bbs/list.asp?boardid=66&page=1

[此贴子已经被Recuerdos于2006-11-4 18:20:11编辑过]

joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-3 05:39:00

一想到我的工作让许许多多英文读者更公平得了解老鼠，忍不住得意一下。。。

showfun · 发表于 2006-11-3 07:46:00

QUOTE:

以下是引用joey_zhou在2006-11-3 05:18:00的发言：

国内的朋友可能不大熟悉维基百科全书 (WIKIPEDIA)。这应该算是网上最权威的英文百科全书。

我用GOOGLE搜索一下ROBERTO AYALA，第一条结果就是维基百科全书对他的介绍。

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roberto_Ayala

点开一看，别的还好，对老鼠的国家队生涯是这么介绍的。

Ayala played for Argentina at the 1996 Summer Olympics, winning the silver medal. He played for Argentina in the 1998 World Cup and was a non-playing squad member in the 2002 competition due a last minute injury. He was then selected as an over-age player as Argentina won the gold medal at the 2004 Summer Olympics.Ayala was also named to the Argentine squad for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany, but unfortunately, he missed a penalty in the quarter-final shootout against Germany.

阿亚拉参加96年奥运会并活得银牌。他参加了98年世界杯，在02年世界杯上因为最后一分钟的伤病而无法上场。他作为一名超龄队员参加04年奥运会并获得金牌。阿亚拉参加了06年世界杯，遗憾的是他在四分之一决赛对德国的点球大战中射失点球。

前面都不错，看到最后简直气晕我，难道老鼠在06年世界杯上做的唯一事情就是射失点球吗?

维基百科全书最好的一点，是他允许读者参与编辑。我把他的国家队生涯编辑为:

Ayala played for Argentina at the 1996 Summer Olympics, winning the silver medal. He played for Argentina in the 1998 World Cup and was a non-playing squad member in the 2002 competition due a last minute injury. He was then selected as an over-age player as Argentina won the gold medal at the 2004 Summer Olympics 。Ayala played an integral part in the Argentine squad for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany. He played brilliantly throughout the tourment and was picked as one member of the All Star Team. In the quarterfinal against Germany he scored a beautiful header that gave Argentina the 1-0 lead. Unfortunately, Argentina lost the penalty shootout after the 1-1 tie.

One of the best defenders in Argentina history, Ayala also shared the most capped hounour with Diego Simone. He played 106 times for the national team as of Novermber 2006, many times as captain.

2006年世界杯阿亚拉是阿根廷队中最重要的成员。整个杯赛他表现极为出色，入选最佳阵容。在对德国的八強賽中，他的一记漂亮头球使阿根廷1-0先。遗憾的是阿根廷被扳平后在点球大战中败北。

阿亚拉是阿根廷历史上最佳后卫之一。他和西蒙尼分享为国家队出场最多次数的荣誉。截止2006年11月，他为阿根廷队一共出场106次，并多次担任队长一职。

红字是我修改的部分。

修改完毕，感觉很爽！

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第一句按照你中文的意思也许这样更好：Ayala played a pivotal role in the Argentine squd...第二句不要再用play做动词了，可以改成maintained exceptional performance throughout...避免redundancy。你觉得呢？

joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-3 09:24:00

完蛋了，试了半天，也无法链接图片。REC来救命啊！

修改前

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gg · 发表于 2006-11-3 12:33:00

QUOTE:

以下是引用showfun在2006-11-3 07:46:00的发言：

第一句按照你中文的意思也许这样更好：Ayala played a pivotal role in the Argentine squd...第二句不要再用play做动词了，可以改成maintained exceptional performance throughout...避免redundancy。你觉得呢？

哈哈，好想去改成我的版本啊：

Ayala played brilliantly throughout the tourment and simply dominated every little striker he faced, like drogba, kezman and a bunch of other suckers. In the quarterfinal match against Germany, even tho ayala was 6 inches shorter than the 2 german defenders marking him, he somehow managed to climb above them and scored a header from romi's corner kick, leaving the shitty german defence embarassed to death.

Without a doubt ayala is the best sweeper in the world of football right now. brazilian forwards usually broke their knees when they attempt to have a shot off in front of him.

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娜娜 · 发表于 2006-11-3 12:48:00

都是英文，看得眼花花的

东写西读 · 发表于 2006-11-3 22:10:00

还好不是拉丁语.百科全书里居然还有球员介绍,也太百科了吧!

郭芙蓉 · 发表于 2006-11-3 23:00:00

QUOTE:

以下是引用joey_zhou在2006-11-3 05:39:00的发言：
一想到我的工作让许许多多英文读者更公平得了解老鼠，忍不住得意一下。。。

葱白一下[]

东写西读 · 发表于 2006-11-3 23:05:00

小郭你还真谦虚哈!

Recuerdos · 发表于 2006-11-4 18:29:00

弱弱的问。。如果以后又有人（比如德国人。。）再改了怎么办啊？

joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-4 21:17:00

嗯，我终于看到截图了，你们看到没有?

我打算请我老公帮我润色一下，最后定稿。

毕竟是最权威的百科全书，我们还是要认真负责的。

REC，不用担心，以后我时不时去瞄一眼，哪个德国死人敢改我就去改回来。

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joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-4 21:20:00

蒙蒙，你家阿蒙的介绍在这里。

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diego_Simeone

Diego Pablo Simeone (born April 28, 1970 in Buenos Aires) is an Argentine football manager and former footballer. A midfielder, he is the most capped player ever for Argentina.

In his club career that started in 1987, Simeone played for Vélez Sarsfield, Pisa, Sevilla FC, Atletico Madrid, Inter Milan, and Lazio. He ended his playing career for Racing Club, playing his last match on 17 February 2006, and then becoming manager for the same team. After a rough start, the team made an impressive finish in the 2006 Clausura, but the pressure was too much for Simeone to handle, and on May 2006 he left Racing and was replaced with Reinaldo Merlo. On May 18, he was signed by Estudiantes de La Plata.

For the Argentine team, Simeone, nicknamed El Cholo after another player with the same surname, amassed 106 caps, the first coming in 1988. He played in the 1994, 1998 and 2002 World Cups. As a defensive player, Simeone scored 11 goals for his country. He was considered a great leader on the pitch. He was also a member of the team that won the silver medal at the 1996 Summer Olympics in Atlanta, Georgia.

During the 1998 World Cup that he was part of an incident in which David Beckham was sent off after kicking Simeone, who had verbally responded to Beckham's foul, to which the Englishman reacted physically (see also Argentina and England football rivalry). Simeone later admitted to have provoked Beckham in order to get him expelled^[1]. In the following match, against Netherlands, Simeone was injured by a tackle during his team's defeat. During the 2002 World Cup, Argentina was eliminated in the Group Stage.

An intimidating figure on the pitch, Simeone is humble off it, admitting to being "embarrassed" to surpass Diego Maradona as Argentina's most capped player.

风中的风之子 · 发表于 2006-11-4 21:37:00

别的都好……基本客观公正……[

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可是……干嘛要提到死海鲜挖[

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东写西读 · 发表于 2006-11-4 21:55:00

死海鲜? 贝壳?

风中的风之子 · 发表于 2006-11-4 22:00:00

那不是写着呢吗[]which David Beckham was sent off after kicking Simeone,
讨厌……这个名字怎么总是阴魂不散[]

joey_zhou · 发表于 2006-11-4 22:00:00

没法子，那是阿蒙职业生涯中最重要的事件，不提反而不公。

要不然你也改改?

另。把贝壳称为海鲜很有创意。。。

东写西读 · 发表于 2006-11-4 22:03:00

偶喜欢吃海鲜,还是不要改,以后见到海鲜会反胃.

风中的风之子 · 发表于 2006-11-4 22:18:00

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Recuerdos · 发表于 2006-11-4 22:50:00

QUOTE:

以下是引用joey_zhou在2006-11-4 22:00:00的发言：

没法子，那是阿蒙职业生涯中最重要的事件，不提反而不公。

要不然你也改改?

另。把贝壳称为海鲜很有创意。。。

为什么阿蒙职业生涯最重要的事件不是带领床单夺得双冠不是联赛最后关头力挽狂澜帮助蓝鹰登顶不是代表阿根廷的14年不是跟随一支大多人听都没听过的球队去打乙级不是从小就成为了伟大的竞技球迷而总是和某个SB的名字挂在一起？

那是新闻界的噱头，不是我们的。

东写西读 · 发表于 2006-11-4 22:56:00

楼上的发言貌似愤青,赞~ 非阿迷倒是可以认为那是阿蒙职业生涯里印象最深的一件事.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-4 23:01:12编辑过]

Recuerdos · 发表于 2006-11-4 23:14:00

楼上的这次不说我说绕口令了，赞

风中的风之子 · 发表于 2006-11-4 23:35:00

QUOTE:

以下是引用Recuerdos在2006-11-4 22:50:00的发言：

为什么阿蒙职业生涯最重要的事件不是带领床单夺得双冠不是联赛最后关头力挽狂澜帮助蓝鹰登顶不是代表阿根廷的14年不是跟随一支大多人听都没听过的球队去打乙级不是从小就成为了伟大的竞技球迷而总是和某个SB的名字挂在一起？

rec也会骂人……赞[]

Recuerdos · 发表于 2006-11-4 23:48:00

汗。。。偷偷骂骂就好了。。要不要放那么大啊。。。很影响输女形象的说。。。

其实大家都知道。。我的着重点是最后一个事件的。。。

东写西读 · 发表于 2006-11-4 23:53:00

恩,我们都知道. 所以你大可不必顾及形象.

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