[原创]今天修改了维基百科全书中关于ROBERTO AYALA的词条，爽！

joey_zhou

国内的朋友可能不大熟悉维基百科全书 (WIKIPEDIA)。这应该算是网上最权威的英文百科全书。

我用GOOGLE搜索一下ROBERTO AYALA，第一条结果就是维基百科全书对他的介绍。

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roberto_Ayala

点开一看，别的还好，对老鼠的国家队生涯是这么介绍的。

Ayala played for Argentina at the 1996 Summer Olympics, winning the silver medal. He played for Argentina in the 1998 World Cup and was a non-playing squad member in the 2002 competition due a last minute injury. He was then selected as an over-age player as Argentina won the gold medal at the 2004 Summer Olympics.Ayala was also named to the Argentine squad for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany, but unfortunately, he missed a penalty in the quarter-final shootout against Germany.

阿亚拉参加96年奥运会并活得银牌。他参加了98年世界杯，在02年世界杯上因为最后一分钟的伤病而无法上场。他作为一名超龄队员参加04年奥运会并获得金牌。阿亚拉参加了06年世界杯，遗憾的是他在四分之一决赛对德国的点球大战中射失点球。

前面都不错，看到最后简直气晕我，难道老鼠在06年世界杯上做的唯一事情就是射失点球吗?

维基百科全书最好的一点，是他允许读者参与编辑。我把他的国家队生涯编辑为:

Ayala played for Argentina at the 1996 Summer Olympics, winning the silver medal. He played for Argentina in the 1998 World Cup and was a non-playing squad member in the 2002 competition due a last minute injury. He was then selected as an over-age player as Argentina won the gold medal at the 2004 Summer Olympics 。Ayala played an integral part in the Argentine squad for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany. He played brilliantly throughout the tourment and was picked as one member of the All Star Team. In the quarterfinal against Germany he scored a beautiful header that gave Argentina the 1-0 lead. Unfortunately, Argentina lost the penalty shootout after the 1-1 tie.

One of the best defenders in Argentina history, Ayala also shared the most capped hounour with Diego Simone. He played 106 times for the national team as of Novermber 2006, many times as captain.

2006年世界杯阿亚拉是阿根廷队中最重要的成员。整个杯赛他表现极为出色，入选最佳阵容。在对德国的八強賽中，他的一记漂亮头球使阿根廷1-0先。遗憾的是阿根廷被扳平后在点球大战中败北。

阿亚拉是阿根廷历史上最佳后卫之一。他和西蒙尼分享为国家队出场最多次数的荣誉。截止2006年11月，他为阿根廷队一共出场106次，并多次担任队长一职。

红字是我修改的部分。

修改完毕，感觉很爽！

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joey_zhou

以下为修改前后的截图。

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[此贴子已经被Recuerdos于2006-11-4 18:20:11编辑过]

joey_zhou

一想到我的工作让许许多多英文读者更公平得了解老鼠，忍不住得意一下。。。

joey_zhou

完蛋了，试了半天，也无法链接图片。REC来救命啊！

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joey_zhou

嗯，我终于看到截图了，你们看到没有?

我打算请我老公帮我润色一下，最后定稿。

毕竟是最权威的百科全书，我们还是要认真负责的。

REC，不用担心，以后我时不时去瞄一眼，哪个德国死人敢改我就去改回来。

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joey_zhou

蒙蒙，你家阿蒙的介绍在这里。

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diego_Simeone

Diego Pablo Simeone (born April 28, 1970 in Buenos Aires) is an Argentine football manager and former footballer. A midfielder, he is the most capped player ever for Argentina.

In his club career that started in 1987, Simeone played for Vélez Sarsfield, Pisa, Sevilla FC, Atletico Madrid, Inter Milan, and Lazio. He ended his playing career for Racing Club, playing his last match on 17 February 2006, and then becoming manager for the same team. After a rough start, the team made an impressive finish in the 2006 Clausura, but the pressure was too much for Simeone to handle, and on May 2006 he left Racing and was replaced with Reinaldo Merlo. On May 18, he was signed by Estudiantes de La Plata.

For the Argentine team, Simeone, nicknamed El Cholo after another player with the same surname, amassed 106 caps, the first coming in 1988. He played in the 1994, 1998 and 2002 World Cups. As a defensive player, Simeone scored 11 goals for his country. He was considered a great leader on the pitch. He was also a member of the team that won the silver medal at the 1996 Summer Olympics in Atlanta, Georgia.

During the 1998 World Cup that he was part of an incident in which David Beckham was sent off after kicking Simeone, who had verbally responded to Beckham's foul, to which the Englishman reacted physically (see also Argentina and England football rivalry). Simeone later admitted to have provoked Beckham in order to get him expelled^[1]. In the following match, against Netherlands, Simeone was injured by a tackle during his team's defeat. During the 2002 World Cup, Argentina was eliminated in the Group Stage.

An intimidating figure on the pitch, Simeone is humble off it, admitting to being "embarrassed" to surpass Diego Maradona as Argentina's most capped player.

joey_zhou

没法子，那是阿蒙职业生涯中最重要的事件，不提反而不公。

要不然你也改改?

另。把贝壳称为海鲜很有创意。。。

joey_zhou

呵呵。公平得说百科全书面对的是全球的普通读者，这个词条肯定是英国人编辑的，能够这样评价阿蒙还算公正。就贝壳事件也基本上是就事论事。

倒是那个老鼠的实在太偏见(或者说无知)，我是气愤不过才改的。

joey_zhou

估计老鼠不大习惯用脚。。。欧冠那个进球明明应该用脚的，他硬把脑袋凑上去，笑得我呀。。。

joey_zhou

不同意，老鼠明明很帅锅。

如果要头发留留长，胡子刮刮干劲干净就更美貌了。

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joey_zhou

蒙蒙我们握手。英雄所见略同。[em15]

joey_zhou

我去游泳了，你们几位夜猫慢料。。。